Advertising Copywriter Expert Teaches Secret Copywriting Psychology of Copywriter Superstars

Want More Orders? More Inquiries?
More Money?
I'LL SET YOUR ADVERTISING ON FIRE!

Paste Your Ad Copy in The Block Below
& I'll Give it a Kick-A$$
"MADISON AVENUE MAKEOVER!™"
... Before Your Very Eyes!

Dear Friend:

DO YOUR SALES MATERIALS NEED A MAJOR-SERIOUS, HE-MAN KICK IN THE A$$?

For a limited-time, I'll do exactly that.

That's because I'm currently available to help you increase the pulling-power of any advertising vehicle that's driving you nuts in poor sales.

That includes your...

Ads
Web sites
E-mails
Brochures
Sales letters
And other materials

No matter what you sell, I can help you... RIGHT NOW.

Listen: I'm a professional advertising man. I know (and use) all the techniques and strategies to influence people to buy.

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I've spent nearly 20 years writing hard-hitting ad copy for some of the largest corporations in the United States. My words have persuaded millions to spend ridiculous sums of money.

Just say the word, and I'll create more POWERFUL HEADLINES… more POTENT COPY… and suggest a FAR BOLDER MARKETING STRATEGY (And depending on the service you choose, I may even suggest new DESIGN and LAYOUT IDEAS, if your advertising piece is already printed or posted online).

LISTEN CLOSELY: No matter what kinds of products you sell... no matter what types of services you offer... my "MADISON AVENUE MAKEOVERS!" can make a dramatic difference in your response.

That's because "MADISON AVENUE MAKEOVERS!" incorporate the same powerfully effective ad-agency techniques and secrets that I've used for giant corporations who spend tens of thousands of dollars for their advertising.

That means you benefit from thousands of dollars in advertising tests! You literally help yourself to technique after technique that other people paid me to test for their companies. You benefit from OTHER people's time and thousands of dollars of THEIR money.

AM I QUALIFIED?

Click HERE to read my bio. Or HERE to read feedback about my performance for others. You'll be in good hands, I assure you.

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HOW FAST DO YOU GET YOUR NEW COPY?

Most "MADISON AVENUE MAKEOVERS!" take only a few days, depending upon the length of your submission. Your order will be acknowledged promptly via e-mail and I'll provide the estimated completion date. Your powerful new copy will be e-mailed to you as a Microsoft WORD, Rich Text or plain text file, whichever you prefer.

Please stop wasting your money. Find out once and for all why your ads, brochures, e-mails, sales letters or web pages are not performing like they should... DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT!

I guarantee you'll be shocked at my findings... and thrilled that you made the small, one-time tax-deductible* investment that can make all the difference in the world for you and the future of your business.

Of course, I'll return submissions that are either inappropriate, or so good that even I can't improve them!

And as a SPECIAL BONUS, if your "MADISON AVENUE MAKEOVER!" totals over $500.00, I'll include a copy of my new 8-cassette audio training course, "THE $50,000 BUSINESS MAKEOVER MARATHON"--as seen on my PRODUCTS PAGE--ABSOLUTELY FREE! (A $99.00 value!) But don't wait! As soon as I have all the consulting I can handle, this bonus offer will be cancelled.

OKAY, ENOUGH SMALL TALK... LET'S GET STARTED!
Simply Follow the 5 Easy Steps Below...

[1] PASTE YOUR COPY INTO THIS BLOCK-The number of words will be counted automatically and the price for each service--based on the exact ad pasted--will be calculated (Skip this step if you choose "Diamond" service).

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Your Ad Contains Words.

[2] NEXT, CHECK THE LEVEL OF SERVICE YOU WANT-Choose from world-class original copywriting from scratch, to standard editing/minor rewriting to improve your existing advertising.

DIAMOND:

WORLD-CLASS ORIGINAL COPYWRITING
FROM SCRATCH... THE ULTIMATE! Includes complete original concept development and fresh original copy creation for your product or service using all the tricks, techniques and strategies I use for multi-million dollar corporations. The absolute premier service if you have no sales materials or want to start completely from scratch.

Please Click the Component(s) You Need Written:

Ads Brochure Sales Letter
Web Page E-mail Other

Next, simply enter your e-mail address here and press this button:

and I'll get back to you with exciting details!

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	PLATINUM:	MASTER-CLASS REWRITING FROM SCRATCH Includes complete expert rewriting of your existing promotional materials using all the tricks, techniques and strategies I use for multi-million dollar corporations. The highest level of editing attention your existing advertising copy can receive. END RESULT: A far more powerful and persuasive sales tool with the power to influence people to buy. Price: $1.75 per word.
BASED ON THE -WORD AD COPY YOU PASTED IN THE BOX ABOVE, YOUR TAX-DEDUCTIBLE* BUSINESS INVESTMENT FOR THIS PLATINUM-CLASS SERVICE WILL BE: $ ($200 minimum)

	GOLD:	AGGRESSIVE EDITING & MODERATE REWRITING Includes extensive editing and complete rewriting of portions of your submission. The strength of the copywriting will be tremendously enhanced. Your copy will read faster, cleaner, clearer. Words will flow. It will crackle with energy and influence. END RESULT: A more powerful and persuasive sales tool that's far more likely to produce the effect you want in the marketplace. The closest thing to writing from scratch. Price: $1.25 per word.
BASED ON THE -WORD AD COPY YOU PASTED IN THE BOX ABOVE, YOUR TAX-DEDUCTIBLE* BUSINESS INVESTMENT FOR THIS GOLD-CLASS SERVICE WILL BE: $ ($200 minimum)

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	SILVER:	ROBUST EDITING & SELECTIVE REWRITING Includes strong editing of your entire submission and rewriting in selected areas. The strength of the copy will be noticeably enhanced. Price: $1.00 per word ($200 minimum).
BASED ON THE -WORD AD COPY YOU PASTED IN THE BOX ABOVE, YOUR TAX-DEDUCTIBLE* BUSINESS INVESTMENT FOR THIS SILVER-CLASS SERVICE WILL BE: $ ($200 minimum)

	BRONZE:	STANDARD EDITING & MINOR REWRITING Includes light editing of your copy. Portions requiring the most attention will be restructured and/or reworded for greater effectiveness. For best results, choose this option only if your copy is already in excellent shape, but could use a bit more punch and polish. Otherwise, choose the "Silver" option, above. Price: $0.75 per word.
BASED ON THE -WORD AD COPY YOU PASTED IN THE BOX ABOVE, YOUR TAX-DEDUCTIBLE* BUSINESS INVESTMENT FOR THIS BRONZE-CLASS SERVICE WILL BE: $ ($200 minimum)

[3] TELL ME ABOUT YOUR COMPETITION!Paste their web site address(es) below. Also, tell me why buyers should choose YOU over them. How are you different and better? This is also the place to tell me any general information that I won't find on your web site. (Don't be afraid to brag!)

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[4] TELL ME ABOUT YOU!

YOUR NAME
YOUR TITLE
YOUR E-MAIL ADDRESS
ORGANIZATION NAME
ADDRESS
CITY, STATE, ZIP
PHONE

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NOW CLICK THE SUBMIT BUTTON BELOW to go to the payment page!

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Thank you! I'll acknowledge your submission promptly and look forward to sending you your new hard-hitting, super-charged sales copy! Talk to you soon!

Success to you, my friend!

Drew Eric Whitman, D.R.S.
Direct Response Surgeon(tm)

P.S.

Be honest: Are you going to spend good money--hundreds, maybe thousands of dollars--in media costs, printing, postage, web design fees, and time WITHOUT the input of an advertising professional?

This is an expensive mistake.

Invest a few dollars with me now. I'm confident you'll consider it among the wisest few dollars you ever spent. Go ahead and paste your ad copy in the first box, above.

The difference in the advertising I return to you will be like night and day. In fact, you'll probably laugh at the copywriting you're now using... and wonder why you hesitated in the first place!

P.P.S.

Listen: This offer is subject to change or may be withdrawn at any time. That's because I'm currently promoting my "ADVERTISING MAGIC!(tm)" 3-hour training seminar and once I get too busy, I'll be too busy for one-on-one consulting. So... if you think you could benefit from my expertise... from having a 20-year ad agency pro improve or create your materials, don't delay. Remember, all makeovers are handled on a first-come basis. Don't wait until I'm too busy to help you. Thank you.

* Consult your tax advisor for details